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#1 Kadelia

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Posted 05 September 2013 - 07:15 PM

In the spirit of the item description project, maybe? Let me just say I love the new icon system on the mini map and I like the navigation system. I would love to see it more polished. The engrish in a lot of text areas in the game turns new players off.

 

I'll start us off.

 

On the mini map, the icons could be named better:

 

"Shield store" -- should be "Armor Shop"

"Weapon store" could be "Weapon Shop"

"Tool store" could be "Tool Shop"

"Convenience service" could be "Convenience Service"

 

Shop seems more consistent with in-game jargon, and these are titles so all words should start with a capital. That's more nit-picking, but "shield store" does need to be changed to armor.

 

When you kick off the navigation system it says:

Navigation > Please move to the direction.

This is engrish.

It should say, maybe:

Navigation > Please move in the indicated direction.

 

When you're plotting a destination:

There are 3 checkboxes for your trip planner.

'Search' (Mouseover: 'Scroll') - change search to Scroll, with tooltip "Use dungeon teleportation scrolls when able."

'Dungeon' (Mouseover: 'Kafra') - First, dungeon doesn't fit in the space given, and it overflows. Second, it is clearly the filter for kafra warps. I suggest changing the display text to "Warps" and the mouseover tooltip to "Use kafra warps when able."

'Airship' (Mouseover: 'Airship') - Tooltop, "Use airships when able."

 

When Checking 'kafra' box and executing a planned trip and your next step is to talk to kafra

Navigation > Use the Kafra Employee this guide

Change to...

Navigation > Talk to the Kafra Employee as your next step.

 

If you try to quit an active planned route:

It says "Still informing! Would you like to quit?"

this is engrishy.

it should be like, "You have a route in progress. Would you like to cancel?"

 

Don't get me started on the help menu, its full of typos and engrish.


Edited by Jaye, 05 September 2013 - 07:34 PM.

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#2 Razzez

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Posted 07 September 2013 - 02:51 PM

How about let's make sure patches just work before doing them.

 

Typos are the least of the problems though. Speaking of typos though "engrish"? :xd

 

I like the navigation system also at least the ONE time I've been able to get it to work.

 

I've only been able to get it to work in a dungeon so far. I've tried using it entering map locations, & monsters, then picking the one I wanted, & it always say's target failed.

 


Edited by Razzez, 07 September 2013 - 02:55 PM.

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