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[NeoNilox]

Well, my friends agreed to post this little comic here, in WP Forums. So here it goes...
 
Only the Prologue and the first Chapter will be shown here. The rest are in the links.
 
Prologue~

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Chapter 1~

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Chapter 2~
 
Chapter 3~
 
Paralogue 1~
 
Chapter 4~
 
Chapter 5~

Intermission~

Chapter 6~
 
Chapter 7~

More to come, believe it or not.
 
If grammar is an issue, I apologize. I'm still learning English. It doesn't help this is my first... err... how to call it? Story?

Edited by NeoNilox, 03 November 2016 - 05:35 PM.

[Retaks]

"I've never seen those skills before."

 

Hahaha awesome!

[KamiKali]

omg this is so adorable! Love it!

[WarlockFier]

Love it!! More please!!! ^___^

[Perezoso15]

Wonderful! hope there'll be more soon : D!

[Kadelia]

It's a good read so far.

[IsisThump]

omg that was so cute xD

 

and that mech is such a creep 

[Edstyle]

omg! Its like a Eureka Seven Ragnarok Version!

btw nice story

[Alaska]

What a cute story! I chuckled when I saw Razor Leaf, haha. 

 

Looking forward to more.

Edited by Alaska, 19 July 2013 - 07:59 PM.

[ArrowSparrow]

Interesting story and characters! Keep up the good job!

[kingjoe547]

Pls... PIN THIS!! I want to read the whole story but I need it to be easier to find

[Pooru]

hohoho! very awesome! good ol RO comics! how long did it take for you to compile those chapters? rather inspiring to make an RO comic again

[Skarlett]

Eeeeeeeeep! You HAVE to make more.

 

It's so adorable! x3

[NeoNilox]

omg! Its like a Eureka Seven Ragnarok Version!

btw nice story

 

I've gotta admit I've never watched Eureka Seven.

 

 

hohoho! very awesome! good ol RO comics! how long did it take for you to compile those chapters? rather inspiring to make an RO comic again

 

It usually depends on how much time I'm "available" here. The whole Prologue & Ch. 1 took me around 4 days, while Ch. 2 took me around 1 week. The "transition" time may vary, since I have to write the chapter and to use it as basis for the comic. I just finished Ch. 2 so...

 

 

For your feedback, thank you very much!

[NeoNilox]

*bumpers*
 
Two new strips for today:
 

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Edited by NeoNilox, 31 October 2016 - 08:19 PM.

[WarlockFier]

Can't wait to see where this is going! I love the characteristic and personality of these characters you wrote up for them! :3 Lif is such a brat, I'm really curious where this would lead to! And what that mechanic is going to do. o-o;; Now whenever I see a mechanic in game with an alarm mask I think of this baddie. xD

[NeoNilox]

Hilarious in Hindsight: When I added Galenne, the mechanic, to the plot, I just checked which was her last headgear, and it was Alarm Mask, so I left it in. My friends tell me she looks badder with that mask, and more "moe" without it. I never saw it that way...
 
Anyway, three new strips today:

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Edited by NeoNilox, 31 October 2016 - 08:23 PM.

[Tenmuki]

so awesome <3 so well made and good plot XD keep up the good work! can't wait to see more!

[Perezoso15]

I think i can kinda relate to the main character,my ol' friend moto had the kindness to put my strange love version in this drawing for me ,i just wish my jealous rival was as cute as lif if that makes any sense XD still waiting for more of this great comic!

[kbb93]

Fantastic story, can't wait for the next strips!

[NeoNilox]

 
SSSSSssssssssssssooooorry!!
 
I've gotta admit it. iRO Wiki editing is rather addicting sometimes, not to mention my motivation wore off for some time.
 
So here I am, presenting... only one strip this time D= (feels ashamed )
 

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Although it may take me a few days, the next batch shall complete this chapter. Mark my words. Still, my apologies.
 
@Perezoso15: Nice drawing lol, although that Vanil (he or she?) will eventually evolve into Sera. Won't it?

Edited by NeoNilox, 31 October 2016 - 08:24 PM.

[IsisThump]

"err... I just found my mask"

 

[kbb93]

+2

[NeoNilox]

Oww... freaking finally!!
 

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Time to take a rest.

Edited by NeoNilox, 31 October 2016 - 08:28 PM.

[kbb93]

Make moreee! I hate reading the last strip because I just want to read the next one heh. good job tho, keep up the great work!