It should be "the" where its underlined in red. Thought I would say something about it.
Oh and I forgot to underline something else. It says "shores" in the first line. I think it should be "chores."
Edited by Joeii, 13 November 2010 - 07:22 PM.
Posted 13 November 2010 - 01:51 PM
Edited by Joeii, 13 November 2010 - 07:22 PM.
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