I've noticed within the game that very little effort has gone towards grammatical correctness. The main issue with this is, besides making it look unprofessional, it makes it harder for new players to clearly understand what a spell does.
This topic will be about suggestions for changes to spell descriptions and tool tips, not changes to the spells themselves.
Since I am currently using the Magician class, I will start off by leaving my suggestion for the changes made to their primary job.
I will leave out abilities that I think are fine as they are now..
I will use brackets () to indicate varying text within the spell description.
For example; a spell that gains an additional affect after a certain level, such as Meteor Fall or Slow Heal.
Current
Point Buster
Blast with magical energy to launch up to X enemies either standing or down on the ground into the air.
Proposed Change
Energy Pillar
Using a concentration of magical energy, you launch X foes into the air.
-
Current
MP Potion Maximization
Increase all MP Recovery effect by X% additional recovery.
Proposed Change
Mana Absorption
Increases the effect of MP recovery consumables by X%.
-
Current
Re-launch
Attack and damage up to X fallen enemies at the same time, launch them high into the air.
Proposed Change
Re-launch
Lift X fallen enemies high into the air.
-
Current
Air Combo
Jump and fire an electric bolt at enemies in mid-air. Can fire as many times as the skill level.
Proposed Change
Zap
While airborne, your regular attack fires (a bolt of lightning(up to X bolts of lightning)) that deal damage to airborne foes..
-
Current
Blink
Unique skill of magicians for bailing out of danger. caster teleports back to certain distance.
Proposed Change
Blink
Teleport yourself backwards a short distance.
-
Current
Meteor Fall
After jumping, drop a small meteor to attack X enemy targets and slightly launch them into the air. Skill is also activated by pressing down arrow key and attack button after jumping.
Proposed Change
Meteor Fall
While airborne, you call down a meteor to damage X enemies (and launch them into the air).
This ability can be performed by holding down and attacking while airborne.
-
Current
Slow Heal
During skill duration, restore X% of Max HP every 3 seconds. Can heal party members once skill level reaches 4.
Proposed Change
Slow Heal
Grant (yourself (you and your allies)) a blessing that restores X% of (your (their)) maximum HP every 3 seconds.
-
Current
Focus
Put on the mask of a cute but ruthless cat to increase INT by +X and Magical attack power by X%
Proposed Change
Feline Cunning
Tap into your inner feline, granting you +X increased INT and X% increased MATK.
-
Current
Fortress
Turns into Cannonhead and blast up to X standing enemies in front.
Proposed Change
Cannon Shot
Transform yourself into a cannon and fire, dealing damage to X standing foes.
-
Current
Cannon Upgrade
Upgrade power of Fortress to give more damage and cause Lv 1 Serious Bleeding effect with X% chances.
Proposed Change
Empowered Ammunition
Increases the damage done by Cannon Shot and grants it a(n) X% chance to inflict a Lv X Bleed.
-
Current
Self Heal
By using X% of mana, a certain ratio of magic attack will be converted to heal amount and applied to oneself.
Proposed Change
Self Heal
Spend mana to heal yourself.
-
Current
Bullet Acceleration
Increases speed of Fortress bullet by X% for it to hit the target quicker.
Proposed Change
Enchanted Gunpowder
Increases the acceleration of the projectile fired by Cannon Shot by X%.
-
Current
Magician's Wisdom
This is magician's distinctive skill. 20% of Mana regeneration rate increasing buff will be given not only to caster also party members and other close users.
Proposed Change
Magician's Wisdom
Increases the MP regeneration rate of you and nearby allies by X%.
I also suggest changing the "Weapon Attack Power" line in the spell descriptions to just "ATK Power" or "MATK Power."
You don't need to tell the player that a spell does damage within the description, since the attack power conversion will be listed on the spell's tool tip.
In addition to that, I propose changing "Attack enemy number : maximum X" to "Max Enemies Struck: X"
Hopefully you'll take these or any other spell description changes into consideration.
