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[Kairuni]

First of all, every one of the quest descriptions needs to be re-written! There's no real thing to say about them other than that, just have a quick read of them. The quest dialogs are pretty decent, for the most part, though a few seem.. Unrealistic, too silly, or just odd. Not sure which off the top of my head.

Second, as you go through the books, you come out with a list that looks like this:

Ehwaz - red spiral.
Osilia - Violet oblique line.
Mannaz - Emerald diamond
Ansuz - Emerald round
Hagalaz - skyblue star-shape
Kano - Red diamond
Rhydo - Skyblue oblique line
Turisus - Yellow round.
Dagaz - Emerald spiral.
Sowilo -skyblue fan-shape
Laguz - Yellow diamond
Isia - Violet spiral
Pertz - Silver spiral.
Verkana - gold-color star
Gebo - Yellow cone
Algiz - Emerald oblique line
Ehwaz (again?) Gray diamond
Teiwaz - Gold round.
Wunjo - Emerald star.
jera - Yellow round
Nosiege - Yellow fan-shape
Ingz - Violet diamond
Fehu - Silver round
Urj - violet oblique line

This presents a few problems!

There are two mentions of Ehwaz. Chapter 1, and Chapter 3. Not sure which is the correct one. One is probably supposed to be Eihwaz, and not Ehwaz.
Urj and Osilia are both same shape and color. Urj didn't work with the furnace when it mentioned violet oblique.
Jera and Turisus are the same shape and color. Turisus is what popped up in the furnace.
Isia says violet slant in the furnace, but violet spiral in the book.

There're probably a few other problems that I didn't run across.

Rune name issues (Pulling these from various sources, but you can find these rune names almost anywhere that talks about Nordic Runes) -

Verkana - Berkana.
Turisus - Thurisaz.
Osilia - Othilia.
Ingz - Inguz.
Mannaz - Mannuz
Sowilo - Sowulo.
Ehwaz - Ehwaz is a rune, but there are two mentioned. One should be eihwaz.
Isia - Isa.
Nosiege - Nauthiz? Not sure.
Rhydo - Raido.

Possibly some others. Please do post if you find them!

Edited by Kairuni, 16 September 2010 - 06:27 PM.