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#1 apathybehim

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 06:51 AM

It's easy to tell me that you're going to stay.
See how you got me lost in your maze?
I love how you have me hung everyday.
I know that you prize having me trapped in your bait.
Is it too much to ask if you could just say,
â??Us falling in love was our biggest mistake.â?
Are you here to free me, or lock me away?
You're lips are so tempting as they whisper and pray.
Are you here to guide me or lead me astray?
Touch your body while I sit here and wait.

Am I your lover or am I a phase?
Do you have another to cover my face?
Is he much better or is he the same?
Do you get wet when he plays your games?

You must enjoy how I'm lost in your grasp.
Hands between your legs, you moan and you gasp.
I admit that I love that look in your eyes,
As you lick your finger while hearing me cry.
Don't think that I'm stupid, you're not immature.
I don't want solutions; you don't want a cure.
I'll pull your hair while I turn you around.
Don't care if I'm broken, keep making those sounds.
Tell me you love me while letting me drown.
I'll drag you here with me 'till I'm lost and you're found.

Am I your lover or am I a phase?
Do you have another to cover my face?
Is he much better or is he the same?
Do you get wet when he plays your games?

Sex, Love and Hate (Things That Make You Masturbate)

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 09:07 AM

beautiful <_< :)
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Posted 19 November 2010 - 09:32 AM

beautiful <_< :)

:P ;)
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Posted 19 November 2010 - 11:10 PM

Cool stuff
I think you stare at your krux too much though.
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Posted 19 November 2010 - 11:56 PM

Cool stuff
I think you stare at your krux too much though.

who doesen't? ok mb guys with male kruxes xD
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Posted 20 November 2010 - 09:41 AM

Cool stuff
I think you stare at your krux too much though.


Haha <_<

I actually wrote this for my ex a while back ago. I was deleting old emails when I found it and felt compelled to post it somewhere; for nostalgic reasons I suppose. LOL
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Posted 20 November 2010 - 10:05 AM

Epic. Way too much time on your hands, but epic.
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Posted 20 November 2010 - 10:21 AM

Epic. Way too much time on your hands, but epic.


Haha <_<

I actually wrote this for my ex a while back ago. I was deleting old emails when I found it and felt compelled to post it somewhere; for nostalgic reasons I suppose. LOL


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Posted 20 November 2010 - 10:38 AM

still too much time, still epic. I read that before i posted, I'm generally good at it unless I quote a single post in a cluster-_- like avenger threads.
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Posted 20 November 2010 - 11:51 AM

still too much time, still epic. I read that before i posted, I'm generally good at it unless I quote a single post in a cluster-_- like avenger threads.


u.u! Has literacy become such a rarity that it makes writing seem like a time consuming task? I'm not finger pointing at you kind sir, but I'm just saying... it took me probably 5 minutes when I wrote this for my ex.

C'est la vie I suppose. Thanks for calling it epic though <_<
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Posted 20 November 2010 - 02:10 PM

Yea its really nice. Nothing wrong with sitting down to write. I myself do art.
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Posted 20 November 2010 - 02:20 PM

I write alot, but poetry... just no for me. More technical crap, drawings and autocad and reports and <_<.
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Posted 20 November 2010 - 02:36 PM

I write alot, but poetry... just no for me. More technical crap, drawings and autocad and reports and :).


Please share some of your drawings :P I haven't drawn in ages, I do some sketches, but nothing too detailed. Here's some:
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I don't know much about AutoCAD, but I did go to college for animation... well, started to go to college for animation <_<

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Posted 20 November 2010 - 02:38 PM

Yea its really nice. Nothing wrong with sitting down to write. I myself do art.

Thanks Syre! Please share some art as well. If you guys feel like it, that is. <_<
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Posted 20 November 2010 - 02:40 PM

I havent been doing a lot lately and dont have any great sketches on me but (we should move this to art section)

Posted Image one sec, I find a vector I did. Posted Image here it is

my two fav pieces to date. the abstract piece in my sig was made by a friend

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#16 apathybehim

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Posted 20 November 2010 - 02:44 PM

(we should move this to art section)


Gladly. Ummm... how do I do that? <_<

*edit*

That's really good artwork Syre!

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Posted 20 November 2010 - 02:46 PM

lol we cant, only a mod can u.u and thanks
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Posted 20 November 2010 - 02:53 PM

Oh okay. Hahaha. Here I was looking all over this thread for a move button <_<

Here's my favorite piece. Sadly, it took me 3 days to make, but please bare in mind that I haven't really drawn since college which was ages ago. And I mean ages :)
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Sorry if the quality is really low. I took the picture with my phone :P

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Posted 20 November 2010 - 03:00 PM

Damn dude thats some amazing stuff.
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Posted 20 November 2010 - 03:05 PM

Thanks man, but I like yours far more than mine. Color adds life and my coloring skills amount up to as much as my Dominator skills. LOL! Anyways, you're ability to blend color adds more flavor and if you asked me to compare, I would pick yours over mine. The colors you picked worked really well. It wasn't too strong that it took away from the art as a whole. Just my opinion. <_<
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Posted 20 November 2010 - 03:12 PM

lmao funny that I would pick yours over my just due to skill and technique. I make what I make only because I can only dream of drawing as weel as that. I'd take a guess that you must have many more years of practice at this than I have xD
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Posted 20 November 2010 - 03:25 PM

Thank you for the compliment, but you shouldn't think like that about your drawings. I think that the beauty in art is that greatness isn't measured in technique alone. Creativity and expression plays a big role and that is something you have plenty of; based on what I'm looking at. Keep at it, your technique will improve as you progress your style.

As for my experience, I've been drawing since I was 9 and I was passionate about it until college (I was majoring in Animation). I've always enjoyed art, but as I grew older, the passion kind of drifted away and it turned into more of a hobby. So now, I just do sketches and random stuff.

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Posted 21 November 2010 - 10:19 AM

i can make stick figures trees and a sun with glasses on...thats where my artistic talent ends

but i can fix cars <_<
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Posted 21 November 2010 - 01:17 PM

i can make stick figures trees and a sun with glasses on...thats where my artistic talent ends

but i can fix cars <_<


LOL. This made my day! Draw me one of those stick figures. I'm sure it'd be epic <_<
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