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[Laburey21]

As in chat?

 
No, I meant as a kind of bug-fix to make some text more readable. I was thinking of how in some areas, mostly F7, monster names are in dark blue text which is very hard to read.
 
 
 

The text for the soulbound remover still needs some work. Deluxe and Deluxe? And the message when it's not working still only mentions special grade.
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This text that pops up when your pet is ready for upgrade is much too long for its space and mentions some kind of quest.
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Edited by Popcorn, 12 August 2015 - 05:35 AM.

[VinylDorayaki]

The text for the soulbound remover still needs some work. Deluxe and Deluxe? And the message when it's not working still only mentions special grade.

Correct into : between Special grade and Deluxe (Artifact) Grade.
 

 
Description : Spirite -> Spirit
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NPC Tailring -> NPC Telling
 
can be "tradable" -> trade
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What about all the parts of Secmathian Destroyer   In the image the Shoe is for Destro class but the name tag includes (Overlord) which is the warrior class. My friend one time bought the wrong item due to the nametag and I feel bad heh ~ 
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Edited by Popcorn, 12 August 2015 - 05:46 AM.

[SoulSight]

 

It should be "Launch the enemy up into the air"

 

 

It should be "Launch the enemy up into the air"

 

 

It should be "stun the enemy"

 

 

It should be "knock down the enemy"

 

 

No idead but it's hitting the enemy in the air.

 

 

It should be "Launch the enemy up into the air"

 

Edit :

 

Top one should be Paris's Wing gasha box

Bottom one should be [Hero] Paris's Wings(White)]

Edited by SoulSight, 09 August 2015 - 01:23 PM.

[Popcorn]

Bottom one should be [Hero] Paris's Wings(White)]

 

Have you been hit by the early morning grammar? 

Paris' Wings is totally correct, since Paris ends with an 's'. So regarding the English grammar (I learned) there is no additional 's' attached after the apostrophe.

[Homurasan]

Paris' Wings is totally correct, since Paris ends with an 's'. So regarding the English grammar (I learned) there is no additional 's' attached after the apostrophe.

 

Might as well request to correct the "Hermes's" set then. (the one obtained from winning Breeze runs)

[Laburey21]

Top one should be Paris's Wing gasha box

Bottom one should be [Hero] Paris's Wings(White)]

Have you been hit by the early morning grammar? 

Paris' Wings is totally correct, since Paris ends with an 's'. So regarding the English grammar (I learned) there is no additional 's' attached after the apostrophe.

Might as well request to correct the "Hermes's" set then. (the one obtained from winning Breeze runs)

 

Paris Wings, Paris' Wings, Paris's Wings - all three are correct to use though the first one has a slightly different meaning.

 

But I don't think it's a good idea to make this topic into a discussion of finer points of grammar and style of language. There are enough worse things to fix in the game text to last a lifetime anyway.

[SoulSight]

Then how about the black one! I contrasted those. Don't laugh at me (

[Rainnowx]

From something I learnt long time ago:

 

_use xs's when xs is singular; in this case, "Paris's" and "Hermes's"

_use xs' when xs is plurial

 

 

Should we by the way, give a point to Lab21?

Edited by Rainnowx, 10 August 2015 - 05:04 AM.

[SoulSight]

Can you contrast between the black and white wings? I see the difference (except color)

[SoulSight]

 

 

 

My home buff : "??? 4% ??" -> Evade rate 4% or 5% 

 

 

??? ?? 4% ?? -> Critical Rate 4% or 5% 

 

The description is wrong, the rate follows by the name!

 

Edit by Popcorn: We are still waiting for the translations from this korean original texts before correcting them.

Edited by Popcorn, 24 August 2015 - 06:26 AM.

[VinylDorayaki]

 

This is the error message I see when I do not have an Enchant Insurance scroll. 

 

 

In order to not confuse the player, I believe the error message should be change into : "There is no proper "Enchant Insurance Scroll" . instead of "Enchant Shift IS "

 

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Edited by Popcorn, 24 August 2015 - 06:25 AM.

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Edit by Popcorn: This has been corrected. But we didn't add the all-seeing eye.

Edited by Popcorn, 24 August 2015 - 06:25 AM.

[Homurasan]

Now this is becoming funny. These shoes are a helmet (or I have two small heads !).

 

 

Lv.5 God of Fury buff grants 13% attack speed and 10% final crit. rate.

 

 

The quest "Invaded! (2)" refers to another name of a particular monster in the area.

 

 

The Ninja party buff grants 1% final crit. rate instead of the announced 2% crit. rate. I don't know about the evade rate though.

 

 

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Edited by Popcorn, 24 August 2015 - 06:23 AM.

[SoulSight]

Now this is becoming funny. These shoes are a helmet (or I have two small heads !).

 

 

Lv.5 God of Fury buff grants 13% attack speed and 10% final crit. rate.

 

 

 

Proof please?

[Homurasan]

Proof please?

 

The fact that I was the one to post it is a proof in itself. I don't find astonishing the fact that some people aren't willing to see for themselves though.

 

 

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Edited by Popcorn, 24 August 2015 - 06:23 AM.

[SoulSight]

It will be great and persuasive if you have proof

[Laburey21]

The only one who needs to be persuaded is Popcorn and he can find proof using his fungineering skillz if he needs it.

 

The God of Fury and Ninja Party Buff issues might have been better to post in the skill descriptions thread, but they will probably be taken care of anyhow.

[sigeel]

the one on the left saying "wizard" should be renamed to "priest",

 

and the right one should prolly decide to have just one name XDDD

 

also I'm not so sure how this evade stat effect benefits to a non agi classes like mages ^^;

 

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Edited by Popcorn, 24 August 2015 - 06:22 AM.

[Kenshiboy]

there is wrong text to in black claw nest. the third boss i think Diablick instead of diabolic

 

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Edited by Popcorn, 24 August 2015 - 06:22 AM.

[Laburey21]

 

Another one of those oddities here in the details.

 

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Edited by Popcorn, 24 August 2015 - 06:21 AM.

[LloydUTR]

this only gives 2 W-coins instead of 5 

 

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Edited by Popcorn, 24 August 2015 - 06:21 AM.

[SuikaH]

It's been a while, but I've hunted some bad translations today, and I can honestly say I've found a gold mine,

 

First, a collage of some errors or confusing sentences I've found around:

 

1st - When you hover over the party search button, you get this sentence, an appropriate translation would be "You can access [the] Party Search and Member search menu"

 

2nd - Good shop license, the description is a bit confusing, I believe "License certificate used to open a good shop." is more appropriate, same issue is for the premium shop license's description

 

3rd - Stop Lavalon's Revival! Quest description  is a bit confusing, "To put Lavalon back to sleep, you must get into Magma Dungeon through Flame Gate Key"

To make it clearer, the description should include the fact you need to beat Rokko in Valid Raeth's mission map, and "get into the magma dungeon [using the] flame gate key". Also "[Get/Obtain] those and give them to Pablo"

 

4th - Mail menu, the "Select All" text is too long, I think just chaning it to "All" would be fine.

 

5th- The last image is from the inventory's misc tab, the explanation for the "Q" is confusing, maybe "A gray Q sign shows this item can be used in a quest" and

"A green Q sign shows you need this item for an active quest"

 

Edit by Popcorn: This has been corrected.

Edited by Popcorn, 24 August 2015 - 06:20 AM.

[SuikaH]

Now for the fun part, when going to see Elga's soul, you can ask for an explanation on Devil's Soul Stones, by pressing "What is Devil's Soul Stone?"

This should be "What are Devil's Soul Stones?", but the explanation itself is completely crazy

 

 

Some parts are understandable, but otherwise it's really confusing and full of errors. "They eventually became carnivals"

 

The first line is Elga's soul's introduction line, I'll attempt to rework this explanation...

 

Intro: "Devil's Soul Stones... Did you bring them?"

 

Button: "What are Devil's Soul Stones?"

 

Explanation: "You want to feel the world of darkness? Well... Sure, I'll show you... It's not that hard to do.
With the Hidden Scrolls, you can enter a world you've never known about. This world has
existed for many years before our existence. Or even longer than that. A world full of monsters.
In that world, there used to be something better than humans, but similar too, something between
devil and angel. They could survive with only water, but they had to fight against humans' invasion
to live. They were so powerful that they could stop humans only with mind control. But... They
became corrupted by the smell of rotten flesh, and eventually became carnivores. After that,
they needed our meat and started to hunt us. We've been giving them dead people to protect
humans and keep them into their world... This was top secret. But now, I am trying to shut their
world off from ours, I've been secretly contacting warriors to fight them, that's why I came here.
Now you know everything. If you want to cooperate, I won't stop you. Kill these monsters, bring
me back their Devil's Soul Stones, and come back to me again."

 

After this, you can continue the dialogue, by asking "How to get Devil's Soul Stones?", and there is another dialogue after that, with the question "There's nothing else you need?"

 

 

"Finding Devil's Soul Stones is not easy, but I can tell you how. You get them by killing those creature from the other world, they exist in every Hidden Zone, which you can access with the Hidden Scrolls. You can obtain them by defeating Elite monsters in Mission Mode, if you slay them, you'll find the way to get the Devil's Soul Stones."

 

"I see you've picked up on that. Humans can't use their abilies for too long if they enter another world in a different dimension. You can only stay for an hour in this world, at the end of every hour you will be sent back to our world, and you will need to use another scroll to enter the Hidden Zone again."

 

 

I hope I stuck to the lore enough and didn't make any mistakes, be sure to point them out if you find any and modify what you need, I took the freedom of changing the last lines because it was outdated and it works differently now.

 

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Edited by Popcorn, 24 August 2015 - 06:20 AM.

[SoulSight]

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Edited by SoulSight, 29 August 2015 - 02:49 PM.

[Zackx23]

I'm wondering if there will be some kind of fix for the element cards sooner or later? The "★" (I copied the text of a card, so that is the symbol) cannot be displayed correctly and ends in an empty square. Because of this you can't enter the Card in chat or easily search them in market. How about changing it to "*" to fix this?

 

Edit by Popcorn: There will, but this takes time, because there are masses to correct.

Edited by Popcorn, 24 August 2015 - 06:20 AM.